VISION: There are parts of this that feel pretty ambitious. In particular, her armor, as well all the chains. However, I'll be honest and say the lack of major detailing on her mane is noticeable, but doesn't come to close to ruining of course. Very well done on the whole.
ORIGINALITY: I have seen ponies in Chaos armor floating around, but I haven't really seen any of Fluttershy paired with Khorne (what an odd mix, rofl). This takes an existing idea an puts a new spin on it, and I very much like that. Very awesome.
TECHNIQUE: Your technique on this is very good. There doesn't seem to be any stray lines, the shading is good, and the outlines are nice and crisp for the most part (if there are any lines that aren't, they don't immediately pop out. Very nice.
IMPACT: I think this leaves a pretty good impact for those that view it (especially for Bronies familiar with WH40K and the lore for Chaos). I can't get the image of Fluttershy gliding around slaughtering hundreds with Lightning Claws out of my head, for some reason.
Overall, very well done! Can't wait to see what other Chaos mash ups you have planned in the future!
All told, somehow what I like most about this is the way her mane is braided on one side and incorporates her cutie mark as a hair clip.
Ponies in power armor is what brought me into this fandom. You've done this to me. I hope you're happy.
Nicely done regardless of my personal musings though.
Anyway, thank you!
Flutter-Kharn: BRING KHORNE HIS FILL!!! OR I'LL RING WHAT I NEED FROM YOUR BROKEN BODIES!!!.....(whispers) if that's ok with you.
Do you take requests, perhaps Rarity as Lucius the Eternal or perhaps even a pre Heresy Fulgrim? or Pinkie Pie or Applejack as a Dark Apostle of the Word Bearers? Just some suggestions. Keep up the great work and kudos to you.
But thanks anyway!
Awesome piece of art