An overall good comic showcasing the CMC, but my main issue is with the premise of the comic itself. I find it difficult to believe a pony can obtain his/her cutie mark without having an in-depth knowledge of the skill itself, and a realization of how truly talented they are in that skill.
That said, it's always nice to see more of the pint-sized ponies and from the brief bit of dialogue, you certainly seem to know how Sweetie Belle thinks. The quality of the art itself is nice, and the demonic portal, while in my opinion not quite menacing enough, is still neat. I enjoyed the little floating jewel on the spire.
Keep on with the art, and congratulations on EQD ^^
ok this is my first critique and I'm not very good at this bu over all i liked it.It is very original and unique and very well drawn. you drew every thing very clearly.I was wondering if you would help me with my channel and check it out.im still really new to this and i would like some help drawing eyes and ponies.I will try to follow you so i can see your fabulous art work. i hope we can be like cyber-friends.so Keep it up! i hope to see more art like this!!! >_<